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Spontaneous Prayer

David Capes
By David Capes
October 16, 2012

I come from a tradition that privileges “spontaneous prayer” and looks suspiciously on scripted prayers or prayers written beforehand.  According to this perspective, spontaneous prayer means prayer from the heart while prescribed prayers or prayers written down beforehand are not from the heart.  I accepted this myself for many years until I met some remarkable Christians and began to read and reflect on Scripture.

One day I was looking for a guitar pick in the guitar case of a friend of mine.  He was a famous Christian recording artist.  Because I was a budding musician, I looked up to him not only for his talent but also because he was a man of faith.  As I looked for the guitar pick, I found a stack of papers on which my friend had written out a series of prayers to God.  Later he told me that he found that writing out his prayers helped him focus and pray more faithfully.  Often when he prayed silently or spontaneously, he said, he found his mind wandering.  One minute he was praying.  The next he was thinking about something else entirely.   I knew well what he meant and think you probably do too.  What was clear to me is that the prayers he had written truly reflected his heart, much like love letters written to one you love.

On another occasion I heard a deacon pray before collecting the evening offering and the sermon.  The prayer went something like this:  “God, we thank you for this day. We thank you for your many blessings.  Be with the missionaries in foreign fields.  Be with the preacher as he brings the message this evening.  Bless the gift and the giver.  In Jesus’ name, Amen.”   This was a spontaneous prayer—it was from the heart of a kind, generous Christian—but it was also in many ways a collection of thoughts and prayers we had heard many times before.  As I have listened to others pray publically, I realize that in many ways spontaneous prayers are not that different than prayers scripted beforehand. 

 Here is the prayer Jesus taught his followers to pray:

Our Father in heaven,

            let Your name remain holy.

Bring about Your Kingdom,

  Manifest Your will here on earth,

            as it is manifest in heaven.

Give us each day that day’s bread—

            no more, no less—

And forgive us our debts

            as we forgive those who owe us something.

Lead us not into temptation,

            but deliver us from evil. (Matthew 6:9-13; The Voice)

Any good commentary on Matthew 6 and Luke 11 will advocate that Jesus wanted his disciples to pray this prayer and he also wanted his followers to pray prayers like this.  One is scripted.  The other is more spontaneous.  Peter Davids, one of the scholars who worked on The Voice, has written a wonderful piece recently on the Lord’s prayer.  You can read it here.   

One pastor I admire claims that prayer is the hardest work he does.  Perhaps you will agree.  I have come to appreciate both kinds of public prayers: spontaneous prayers spoken from the heart that collect bits and pieces of earlier prayers and scripted prayers written from the heart that reflect someone’s desire to speak honestly before a gracious God.

Here is a good prayer exercise.  Read a biblical psalm through several times and then turn it into your own prayer.  It may help to write it down on a piece of paper.  In any case make it your own.   There are many wonderful prayers in the Bible that can be models for us. 


How would you take and pray Psalm 131 for yourself? 

 

 

 


David Capes lives in Texas and is the Thomas Nelson Research Professor at Houston Baptist University. He earned his Bachelor's Degree in Religion at Mercer University in Atlanta, his Master's in Divinity and his doctorate in New Testament at Southwestern Baptist Theological Seminary in Texas. He is the author of numerous publications and is one of the top scholars and writers for The Voice.

Comments

Chad Whitley said...
October 16, 2012
Dr. Capes--I love the exercise you proposed at the end! I'm a student pastor, and I put this to use on our last Youth Sunday. The Voice Bible was instrumental in helping me with the exercise, and hearing our students read Scripture--adapted into a prayer--for the worship service was moving.

Thanks!
Chuck Venhuizen said...
October 17, 2012
I have found Psalm 91 very well suited for this exercise. It's easy to change the 3rd person pronouns to the 1st person, so "He who takes refuge..." becomes "I take refuge..", and "For He will rescue you.." becomes "For He will rescue me..", etc. This is an amazing prayer. I don't leave home without it.
David Capes said...
October 18, 2012
Chad, thanks for your comment. Praying the psalms is a good discipline to learn early in life. I've edited the post a bit and invited people to reflect on Psalm 131. I'd love to hear from you and others on how you'd make it your own.
David said...
October 18, 2012
Chuck, Well done. Sometimes it is as simple as a change of pronoun, like you say. I've edited the post and invited people to turn Psalm 131 into their own. How would you do it? What would your psalm look like?
Chuck said...
October 20, 2012
Thanks for highlighting this very intimate psalm for us, David. The last verse suggests a corporate context, so I wonder if the ancient Hebrews sang the psalm while travelling to a Temple festival. The Voice translation of this prayer makes it an excellent instrument to help us transition from the mundane to the sacred when we gather together for worship. In that light, here is my edition.

Psalm 131 – A song of David for those journeying to worship – adapted as a prelude to public worship; can be spoken or sung, and can incorporate various postures and dance movements.

People: O Eternal One, our hearts are not occupied with proud thoughts;
Our eyes do not look down on others;
We don’t even begin to get involved in matters of faith, state and business,
or the many things that defy our ability to understand them.

People (personalized): Of one thing I am certain: my soul has become calm, quiet and contented in You.

(Pause to contemplate)

All the Woman (tenderly, personalized): Like a weaned child resting upon her mother, I am quiet. (pause)

All the Men (tenderly, personalized): Like a weaned child resting upon his mother, I am quiet.

People (personalized): My soul is like this weaned child. (pause)

Worship Leader (slowly, with passion and authority): Chosen people of God, stake your trust completely in the Eternal – from this very moment and into the vast future.

Worship Leader (leads people into next movement of worship)
Uncle Squid said...
October 20, 2012
Still their hearts if they are insane.
Staunch their flow if they bleed.
If they are nauseated, fill them with warmth and contentment.
If they are disoriented, right their minds.
If they are slow, ease their burdens so that they may fly.
If they are restless, expand their consciousness and give them room to know.
If they are angry, justify their righteousness with righteous vindication.
If they are sad, ...kokua dem.
If they have sinned against you, remove the shame of their actions with with all of your grace.
Empower them with the strength to forgive.
Treat their small wounds with shiny cartoon Band-Aids and soft mommy kisses.
Cease all the damnable noise! ...and give them some peace.
Organize their time efficiently.
Fill their thirsty eyes with color and splendor.
Restore their abilities and and encourage artistry in their usage.
Motivate their souls.
Allow them to drive their lives like a sweet, cherry sportscar!
Cause your people to thrive.

This was originally written as a prayer but it also works as an ideal standard of personal conduct and leadership, as well as an admonishment to loved ones.
David said...
October 20, 2012
We have had some interesting responses to the post. Unfortunately, the poetic formatting is lost in this format. If these are used in worship, please let me know.
David said...
October 20, 2012
We have had some interesting responses to the post. Unfortunately, the poetic formatting is lost in this format. If these are used in worship, please let me know.
Chuck said...
October 21, 2012
To clarify, when the Voice Blog software processed my previous submission regarding Psalm 131, it did not capture the "screen play" formatting that I inserted. Anything in brackets are instructions and the word or phrase immediately preceding the brackets signify who is speaking. Because my edition essentially preserves the Voice translation text, it retains its poetic nature and, in my opinion, can be used effectively in a congregational setting. Also, David, in the interest of staying on your post's topic, I fail to see how the post from "Uncle Squid" is even remotely connected to Psalm 131.

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